最近看到了一篇文章,是有關馬總統的,不過不是他的錯,而是寫文章的人的問題。
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(國語日報週刊693期/文 凌明玉/圖 鍾偉明)
陽光健康的臺灣總統馬英九
有個人非常愛跑步,不但每天早上跑、在城市、鄉下都跑,連去國外出差也不忘跑步,不
管在哪裡都能跑!他就是臺灣的新總統──人稱「小馬哥」的馬英九先生。
擁有健康形象又熱愛跑步的小馬哥,跑步時,除了小心野狗和車子之外,總會順便想想公
事,跑步的時間,是他安靜思考的最佳時刻。
體格健壯的馬總統,讀大學時可是個胖子,曾經被同學取笑是「馬胖」!於是他決定每天
去海邊游泳,趁當兵前鍛鍊體能,從此改變了自己的身材,也變得更健康了。
後來小馬哥逐漸養成慢跑的習慣,因為在美國讀書時,玩排球扭傷腳,為了復健,他開始
慢跑,結果跑出興趣,跑到了現在。這種不論風雨的堅持精神,造就了他超人一等的體力
和耐力。
他伏地挺身最高紀錄可連續做一百二十下,還曾游泳橫渡日月潭,三十年跑過的路全部加
起來,等於臺北、高雄來回跑上二十趟呢。
除了運動的興趣,擁有哈佛大學法學博士學位的馬英九,從小就喜歡閱讀。每天一大早,
馬英九就乖乖起床念書,爸媽規定他早起先讀《唐詩三百首》、《千家詩》,還教他用毛
筆抄寫《古文觀止》,培養了閱讀和寫書法的習慣。
書中的世界,讓青少年時期的馬英九非常著迷,除了爸媽要他讀的古典文學之外,他也愛
看武俠小說,還寫過一部小說《竹劍銀鉤》。
「說時遲那時快,大俠的輕功果然了得,轉眼間就不見人影啊!」小馬哥常將書中的故事
說給鄰居或同學聽,對著一大群人「說書」時,他好像變成那位威風八面的大俠似的,因
此老師特別在說話課時,讓小馬哥上臺表演一番。
小時候那個愛說書的小孩,變成了愛跑步的新總統,直到現在,馬英九始終保持著閱讀和
運動的好習慣。熱愛運動的馬英九,可說是臺灣最健康、最有活力的新總統;如果你喜歡
跑步也喜歡閱讀,就會懂得這種快樂呵。
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這篇文章寫於國語日報,而國語日報是給誰看的呢?就是國小學童,也就是我們未來的主人翁。馬英九他的形象並不算差,有好的地方寫出來當然大家也沒意見,但應該要有一個原則,那就是要根據事實來客觀的寫出,而不是像這篇文章一樣的加油添醋。甚麼「跑步時......總會順便想想公事(這也太扯了吧)」、甚麼「超人一等的體力(說體力不錯就好了)」、甚麼「他好像變成那位威風八面的大俠(無言...)」,讓人看了總會有拍馬屁之嫌,也讓我想起了以前課本裡面講到我們民族的救星、世界的偉人--蔣總統看魚逆遊而上故事的情節。可能作者有意想要讓國小學生閱讀起來覺得有趣,但是他們心智與知識方面都尚未成熟,寫這種文章給他們看,難免有刻意要灌輸給他們某種特定個人形象的意識,這當然不能說是神化,但已經是美化了,至少標題說"陽光健康",我怎麼樣無法跟馬總統聯想在一起。
何況文中講的這些優點,其實台灣還有其他更好的模範,雖然有灌輸運動健康的想法,但馬英九應該還有其他更應該講的東西,卻沒有寫出來。例如他對兩個女兒的家庭教育,算是滿開明民主的,尊重他們的興趣;他的英文很棒,當過翻譯官。國語日報有教育責任,既然是報導國家元首,更應該是能平實寫出他的具體貢獻,而不是讓我們感覺好像他的政績就是在跑步。而且更要注意到是,他畢竟是個政治人物,處理這方面的東西還是要很小心,而不是將他偶像化。國語日報說這不是吹捧,但我們用一樣的標準來看,當初陳水扁當總統的時候,請問國語日報為何沒寫他從貧困的家庭中,努力讀書向上後來成為總統的文章?還有,事後國語日報為什麼又要把文章刪掉呢?
作者是凌明玉,是個作家,有網友找了他的資料與學經歷:
作家: 凌明玉
筆名: 毛襪、藍柿子
性別: 女
籍貫: 臺灣屏東
出生日期: 1976年2月10日
學經歷: 國際商專銀行保險科肄業,目前就讀空中大學人文學科系。曾任復興國小代課
老師,作文創意教室作文老師,華文網出版集團童書編輯,全美出版社書系編輯,鷹漢文
化公司百科主編,圓神出版社、商周出版公司、聯經出版公司、漢湘出版社特約書系撰文
。現專事寫作。
文學風格: 凌明玉創作文包括散文、小說。主題以少兒寫作與女性成長為主。傳記多記
名人故事,以受孩童歡迎之導演和創作者之成長與奮鬥做為題材,散文關注兒童教育,描
繪對幼童世界之探索與觀察。短篇小說多書寫愛情。探索女性幽微心境,以細膩筆觸呈現
都會女性於婚姻、愛情與性別上之轉變與掙扎。
文學成就: 曾獲中央日報小說獎、聯合文學文藝營小說獎、世界華文成長小說獎、吳濁
流文藝獎小說獎、省教育廳兒童文學少年小說獎、省教育廳兒童文學創作獎、民生報兒童
文學獎等獎項。
(引自《2007台灣作家作品目錄》)
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有人對此事評道:「寫了那些書、得那些獎,仍然默默無聞,寫了這篇捧馬的文章,立刻一炮而紅。以後寫凌明玉的資料可以多寫一條:2008年曾撰寫一篇〈陽光健康的臺灣總統馬英九〉」。如果她看到了這樣的評論,真不知道是做何感想阿....

o•o 加油,別放棄,我們的星球,是變動的,生老病死,喜怒哀樂,生命 生生不息。 知足常樂。 很多國家,現在溫度,正+40度 或 負-40度, 生 活 和 生存,非常艱辛。 --- 蘇+澳+後勤+某某部,也曾 酒後駕車,BMW,車頭全毀,引擎噴飛,人沒事,上過頭條新聞,網路可以查尋到。(上新聞) 該某某部,還發生過,特別案件,因老婆,無照駕駛,老公軍人,跑去夥同鄰居,製造假車禍,真詐保險公司,雖然後來,心裡不安,主動告知,保險公司,還是被,警方發現,移送地檢署偵辦。(沒上新聞) 不知道,今年 還是去年,某艦9+3+7,有士兵,去淡水遊玩,因薪俸較低,且薪俸運用和理財不佳,到賣場超市,偷竊一盒保險套。(就算船號記錯,內容不會錯,因為是,公開場合,全體宣導,注意事項)(沒上新聞) --- 蘇+澳,南+方+澳。 社區、營區,真糟糕。 普悠瑪出軌事件、大橋斷裂事件、海軍伊清楓事件。 --- 請強化,資訊安全,駭客已經厲害到,可以入侵手機,啟動與關閉軟件,並監視手機與盜取圖片和資料,造成用戶的錯覺,刻意制造出,手機用戶,幻想 或 精神病。 利益與衝突,攏斷與掌控。 --- 刮刮樂,上面號碼,應該以, 發型款版本,進行編碼, 後面則以,發行張數量,進行編碼。 ABC-1234567(款式-張數) 不然誰知道,到底有沒有,少印 或 多印。 --- 支持公益彩卷。有錢的話,當然會幫助需要的人。 請上架,因賠錢,而下架的,樂線九宮格,謝謝。 請20:00封盤,20:05開獎。(20:30開獎,理由是,需要計算,消售金額,騙三歲小孩喔) --- 一個、謊言、炒作、洗腦...的世界。 早就已經,沒有什麼,商品供需了,所以才會造成,大家沒什麼收入。(大家在比氣長,看誰食物多) 全世界都相同問題,所以才會打,貿易戰。(太平洋 魚獲 和 工作機會) 食物,才是真的(王道),其它都是假的! --- 經濟好壞? 大家,房貸額度用光、信貸額度用光、信用卡額度用光、商品沒供需 股票炒不起來、虛擬貨幣 假的上上下下。(負債累累) 只能說,以前買到房屋 或 擁房者,已經 還清債務的人,才是幸福的。(低房價) 以前是,(慢調生活),(農業時代),(相互競爭少),(人人有田),(人人有房),現在反過來了。 --- (洗腦兼爛權 的 學長學弟制 軍隊)槽糕到不行。 --- (玩弄人、貪汙,事件永無止息),(滅證洩責,第一名),(商業值供獻零),(只會從國庫,透過預算,拿老百姓,繳的稅收,進行揮霍) [基層工人,跟老百性相同,還比較有,供獻價值] --- Come on, don't give up, our planet is changing, with birth, old age, sickness and death, joy, anger, sorrow and joy, and life is endless. Contentment is always happy. In many countries, the current temperature is positive +40 degrees or negative -40 degrees. It is very difficult to live and survive. --- Su + Australia + logistics + XX department, also once drunk driving, BMW, the front of the car was completely destroyed, the engine was flying, people were okay, the headlines can be found on the Internet. (On the news) There have also been special cases involving his wife, unlicensed driving, husband and soldier. They went to work with neighbors, made fake car accidents, and scam the insurance company. Although later, he was uneasy, he voluntarily informed the insurance company. , The police found it and transferred it to the Prefectural Procuratorate for investigation. (Not in the news) I don't know, this year or last year, a certain ship 9+3+7, there are soldiers, go to Danshui to play, because the salary is low, and the use of salary and financial management are not good, go to the supermarket and steal a box of condoms. (Even if the ship number is wrong, the content will not be wrong, because it is, public occasions, all publicity, precautions) (not on the news) --- Su + Australia, South + Fang + Australia. The community, the camp, it's really bad. Puyuma derailment incident, bridge fracture incident, navy Yiqingfeng incident. --- Please strengthen information security. Hackers are already powerful enough to invade mobile phones, start and close software, monitor mobile phones and steal pictures and data, causing users to misunderstand, deliberately creating, mobile phone users, fantasy or mental illness. Interests and conflicts, severance and control. --- Scratch music, the number above should be, Hair style version, coded, After that, the number of issued sheets is used for coding. ABC-1234567 (style-number of sheets) Otherwise, who knows, whether there is less printing or more printing. --- Support charity rolls. If you have money, you will certainly help those in need. Please put it on the shelf, because it lost money, and it was taken off, Lexian Jiugongge, thank you. Please close the plate at 20:00 and draw at 20:05. (The lottery is drawn at 20:30, the reason is that it needs to be calculated, the amount of sales, to cheat a three-year-old child) --- A world of lies, hype, brainwashing... It has been long since, there is nothing, commodity supply and demand, that's why everyone has no income. (Everyone is getting angry, see who has more food) The world has the same problem, so it will fight a trade war. (Pacific Fish Catch and Job Opportunities) Food is real (king way), everything else is fake! --- Is the economy good or bad? Everyone, the mortgage line is used up, the credit line is used up, the credit card line is used up, there is no supply and demand for goods, stocks cannot be speculated, and virtual currencies are going up and down. (Large debts) It can only be said that those who have bought or owned a house before and who have paid off their debts are happy. (Low house price) It used to be, (slow life), (agricultural age), (less competition), (everyone has a field), (everyone has a house), but now it’s the other way around. --- (Brainwashing and ruined power of the senior schoolmate system army) Too bad. --- (Playing with people, embezzlement, the incident never ends), (Extinguish evidence and venting responsibility, the first place), (Commercial value for zero), (Only from the national treasury, through the budget, the tax paid by the people and the tax will be squandered) [Grass-roots workers are the same as Lao Bai, but they are more valuable, offering value] ---
關閉系統基哨站。 這個世界,只不過是,謊言支撐起來,當一切改變時,別期待 國家 與 政府 或 任何人的承諾,因為 生死,都隨時存在,只是人類體型放大化,且記憶裡 存在著,安全思想,比較多一些生存而已。 沒有供需,一切都是假的,只是透過 各種手段 與 職業,獲取 等值的證明,紙鈔 與 錢幣。 所以生存概論,推翻政權 或 加入集團組織。 This world is just supported by lies. When everything changes, don’t expect the promise of the state, the government or anyone, because life and death exist at any time, but the size of human beings is enlarged, and there is in memory, safety thoughts, comparisons Survive more. There is no supply and demand, everything is fake, just through various means and occupations, to obtain proof of equivalent value, banknotes and coins. So an introduction to survival, overthrow the regime or join a group organization.
一個錯誤的選擇 一個錯誤的環境 造就了 一連串 錯誤的事件 軍隊 隸屬 特殊環境 , 官員有責 解決底下問題, 否則沒資格 命令 不要只會 , 升官發財 , 滅證卸責, 受傷死亡, 都不算數, (該死的軍隊)(管理極差) [該休息 休息][該工作 工作] [很困難?] (作息時間,與外面社會,稍微不同,當然正常) (部隊管理不佳, 造成他人精神壓力問題) (部隊管理不佳 ,造成他人工作負荷過重) (部隊管理不佳,造成 軍職 約聘, 捉弄 與 陷害 他人, 永久上的紀錄遺憾) (受傷沒說,完全不算數)(內傷算自己該死) (卸責厲害的軍隊) ( 上電視、上報紙、莒光園地、女兵日記 ) (形象 洗白 第一名) A wrong choice A wrong environment Created a series of wrong events The army is in a special environment, and officials have the responsibility to solve the underlying problems, otherwise they are not qualified to order Don't just get promoted and get rich, destroy evidence and shirking responsibility, Injuries and deaths don’t count, (damn army) (very poor management) [Should take a break] [This job should work] [It’s difficult?] (The work and rest time is slightly different from the outside society, of course it is normal) (Poor management of the troops, causing mental stress to others) (Poor management of the troops, resulting in excessive workloads for others) (Poor management of the troops, resulting in military appointments, teasing and framing others, permanent record regrets) (I didn't say the injury, it doesn't count at all) (Internal injury counts as one's own damn) (Short the blame for the powerful army) (On TV, Newspaper, Juguang Garden, Female Soldier's Diary) (Image whitewashing first place)